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authorBryce W. Harrington <b.harrington@samsung.com>2013-08-09 01:47:04 +0000
committerKristian Høgsberg <krh@bitplanet.net>2013-08-08 21:38:14 -0700
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publican: Cleanup Preface's grammar.
Signed-off-by: Bryce Harrington <b.harrington@samsung.com>
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<title>Preface</title>
<para>
- This document concerns the (i) Wayland architecture, (ii) Wayland model of
- operation and (iii) its library API. Wayland protocol specification is shown
- also in the Appendix. The document here is aimed at Wayland developers and
- who is looking for information how to program with it, but it is not meant
- primarily for applications developers.
+ This document describes the (i) Wayland architecture, (ii) Wayland model of
+ operation and (iii) its library API. Also, the Wayland protocol specification is shown
+ in the Appendix. This document is aimed primarily at Wayland developers and
+ those looking to program with it; it does not cover application development.
</para>
<para>
- There have been many contributors to this document and, while this is the
- first edition only, many errors are expected to be found. We appreciate
+ There have been many contributors to this document and since this is only the
+ first edition many errors are expected to be found. We appreciate
corrections.
</para>
<literallayout>